We were learning to write an explanation about how things work or,why it happens.
what features do I need a my writing to explain how something works or why it happens so my reader has a clear understanding.
I found it easy to get my writing done without having to move.
I found working on a device easy because I find writing in a book hard for me.
I found my diagram hard because I was finding images of google but when I showed my teacher mrs poole she said i have to draw it on google drawing so then that took long .
I really enjoyed lots of things because nothing was to hard I really liked the quiet because there was not a lot of sound.
Next time I will use better words by using a thesaurus and ask for more help when I need the help.
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Kia ora. My name is Harmonee and I attend mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. Riley, I love how you added lots of detail to your cycle on how chocolate is made. I didn’t know what grounded was until you told using your post.